we’re all shadows here
strung flat and powerless
under that searing whip of blue
you can see where
the land has rusted
shrugging sunsets into itself
heat upon rabid heat
such patriotic decay
windmills like stark flowers
measure decades in their browning
and their screech
(skinned metal)
bleeds into every afternoon
we built our tiny huts, dark ovens
to cook our souls and our wives
and we fenced in hope
post-and-rail sprigs,
repeated horizons
we’re all shadows here
scrub-battered and shiftless
and we must lean
borrowing the long foot of the wind
THank you! Ekphrastics have become an occasional go-to when my head is empty of writables. I have to think you and K Hartless for opening up the world of art to me as an area for inspiration. I’m kind of excited about exploring Australian art while I do it. I’ve never been good at galleries but this is fun and might actually provide a more engaged attitude to galleries.
Thanks, K! So glad you like it!!! Honestly didn’t feel that great about it when I posted it so am thrilled that, while I slept, people have been so positive..
Dude, you just undermined my best line! 😉 But then I realised that even Aussies wouldn’t build a windmill in a place with no wind. That wind poofs right in from pretty much any direction and there’s nothing to stop it. But you’re right that Nolan’s painting doesn’t exactly embody movement of air. I just imagined that bit. 🙂
Cracky, this is good. Long foot of the wind! Sensational stuff.
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THank you! Ekphrastics have become an occasional go-to when my head is empty of writables. I have to think you and K Hartless for opening up the world of art to me as an area for inspiration. I’m kind of excited about exploring Australian art while I do it. I’ve never been good at galleries but this is fun and might actually provide a more engaged attitude to galleries.
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I’m glad it works for you. I find images endlessly inspiring.
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“Such patriotic decay” love this line!😁❤️👌
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Thanks I hummed and haaaed about that line, liking it but not knowing if it was understandable. So glad you liked it.
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Made a lot of sense to me anyways. 👍😁 Well done! 👏
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That penultimate stanza is awsome. Flat cap removed in deference! 👏👏👏
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Thank you!!! 😊
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This comment must have been composting in my brain, Hobbo. I think we should start a writing competition called the Pen Ultimate. 😉
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Dauphy suggested an alternative of The Pen Is, but I explained to him why that wouldn’t work! 😂
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LOL Oscar would be in on that one. He’d lick the competition, no sweat.
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So good! Love the last stanza.
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Thanks, Bob!
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What an amazing poem. Love the rusty feel of the imagery, the windmill flowers. One for the chapbook. It’s being saved.
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Thanks, K! So glad you like it!!! Honestly didn’t feel that great about it when I posted it so am thrilled that, while I slept, people have been so positive..
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👏💜
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just feels derelict. Hard to imagine even the wind stopping by to poof that windmill.
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Dude, you just undermined my best line! 😉 But then I realised that even Aussies wouldn’t build a windmill in a place with no wind. That wind poofs right in from pretty much any direction and there’s nothing to stop it. But you’re right that Nolan’s painting doesn’t exactly embody movement of air. I just imagined that bit. 🙂
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Yes, just the presence of the windmil offsets the stillness I got from the image.
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Wow this is good. It’s like you put words to that painting. An ode to the struggling farmers family.
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Thanks so much, Ulle!
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