In the Carpark
in the carpark long puddles my wheels splinter a church steeple and wobble autumnal trees later, feeling daring I plant my boot in the wide grey sky and watch it rattle like wind juice
Written for Twiglet #277 “wind rattles”
In the Carpark
in the carpark long puddles my wheels splinter a church steeple and wobble autumnal trees later, feeling daring I plant my boot in the wide grey sky and watch it rattle like wind juice
Written for Twiglet #277 “wind rattles”
This is fantastic!
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Thank you!
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Wind juice, eh? Great closing line to fine work. Thanks.
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Thanks, Ron!
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In just a few lines you took us for a spinn from the car park, excellent!
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Thanks, Ulle!
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Love this! ‘wind juice’
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Thanks! 🙂
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magnificent: you’ve written a wondrously inventive poem out of the simplest materials : inspirational
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Thanks, John! Your words are very much appreciated!
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Completely wormesque.
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lol can’t help that, now 🙂
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Those puddles reflect a lot. Lovely, lovely poem
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Many thanks, Debi!
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Wind juice! Love this whole moment described 🙂
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Thanks! ❤
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