Captain Morning
have you always been?
Holding the tiller,
prow skewed in
among cloud layers
Imagine one
enormous star
baked into
sky’s dark bread
infinity’s rising yeast
and can you hear
the breaking?
Brittle crack // a toffee eye
sheets down,
permanent raining
Captain Morning
skipper of waking
your yellow fuzz
warms my neck,
bids me have faith.
Why question the sun?
Every stanza has such unique and memorable imagery. And the final line, “Why question the sun?” serves as such a profound coda to the poem. Wonderful stuff! 🙂
Thanks, John. I have just started a part time job (first paid work in 9 years), I had a little launch for my book, and my aunt has been visiting from the US so life has been incredibly busy. It wouldn’t surprise me at all if my poems didn’t make sense. I am hoping the job will get more normal and I will settle back into my old writing routines.
thanks for sharing that, Worms; may the job go well; and I’m sure you’ll get some tales from your aunt: all grist to the mill; your writing is challlenging at times but that’s a mark of a good writer; to shake us up a little 🙂
Every stanza has such unique and memorable imagery. And the final line, “Why question the sun?” serves as such a profound coda to the poem. Wonderful stuff! 🙂
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Thanks Mike! Such generous commenting as always!!
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How fabulous: “baked into sky’s dark bread” … love that.
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Thanks, Misky!!
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This makes Lennons Imagine look like a pale moonlight. Excellent!
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Wow Ulle!! I feel very honoured!!
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I love that ending question.
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Thanks, Bob!
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Stanza two captivates. I love the certainty of captain morning.
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Yup. 🙂 The ship of day needs a skipper!
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I was puzzled till the end when it all became brightly clear 🙂 the yeast stanza shines for me and the line ‘your yellow fuzz warms my neck’ 🙂
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Thanks, John. I have just started a part time job (first paid work in 9 years), I had a little launch for my book, and my aunt has been visiting from the US so life has been incredibly busy. It wouldn’t surprise me at all if my poems didn’t make sense. I am hoping the job will get more normal and I will settle back into my old writing routines.
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thanks for sharing that, Worms; may the job go well; and I’m sure you’ll get some tales from your aunt: all grist to the mill; your writing is challlenging at times but that’s a mark of a good writer; to shake us up a little 🙂
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