(There are) many stories which are not on paper, they are written in the bodies and minds of women. (Amrita Pritam) like winter trees: wick bare & bearing weight of wind. slick silver sticks tick & thicken year on year bent for benediction... just so we’ve stood as gazelles under gaze of lions revering & fearing: onslaught or ennui, on & on... the gusts of disgust, denuding & undeniable. we too tick & thicken stricken, now striking marking and marching distance defining your jaws of yore
Written for Punam’s dVerse Prompt “Women are People”
I can see that winter tree, bare and bearing weight of silver. The imagery of the gazelles under the gaze of lions is very striking too. Beautiful reflections on life and relationships.
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Thank you, Grace!
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Your poem is beautiful … ‘bent for benediction’ is breathtaking.
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Thank you so much, Helen!
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on & on… the gusts
of disgust, denuding
& undeniable.
So strong, frustrating, snd too often real – excellent piece!
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Thanks so much, Rob!
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Beautiful and profound ❣️
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Many thanks!
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You are most welcome
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Worms, so many beautiful lines in this somber reflection! I love this…thank you for joining in.
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Thank you, Punam… a really interesting prompt!!!!
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What a beautiful way to explore womanhood-the bending, graceful nature and the fierceness of rising up. Simply brilliant.
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Many thanks, Bridgette! I so appreciate your comment!
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