
help me be a tunnel dark round dark round dark round the edges black pants and a l o n g black back like, you know, like a real tunnel the way its shoulder blades might bend against the landscape hips busting out feet edge feet edge feet edge for the track push off from this shimmy square wall and show light through the middle lifeโs green promise and wear glasses wear black glasses with me together I donโt want tunnel vision no way no way I donโt want tunnel vision
Written for Visual Verse Anthology Vol 9 Chapter 8
This is so fun! ๐
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I was enjoying going through the tunnel until I smacked my head on the hand bag ๐
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Super hip, Worms. Love the tunneled text.
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Brilliant. Reads like song lyrics. Hope it gets in!
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Oh thanks! I didn’t submit it. I had no confidence in it at all. So I really appreciate your kind words.
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Oh no! Today’s the last day so you just about have time to submit if you wanted to? I think it’s brilliant. Even if you don’t, you got a good poem from the prompt.
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Thank you! You’re very kind. I will just look forward to next month’s prompt.
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