
Unwanted
our child my belly and you list losses... tears of griffins couldn’t salt my heart like your face now blank as the steel sky oh grant me some bloody sun
Written for K. Hartless’ Petite Pen Ekphrasis – Ron Hicks’ artwork
Unwanted
our child my belly and you list losses... tears of griffins couldn’t salt my heart like your face now blank as the steel sky oh grant me some bloody sun
Written for K. Hartless’ Petite Pen Ekphrasis – Ron Hicks’ artwork
This is the definition of tragedy.
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Yes. 😦
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Poignant. And very well done.
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Thanks, Bob
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It’s a whole story in under 30 words and you capture the grandiosity of this sort of moment. The sun seems like the truth and it’s not something that may ever surface in this situation. I love this, Worms. Thank you for writing alongside me to this image.
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Many thanks, K.
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Sparse and beautifully tragic, Jo.
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Thanks so much, Tracy!
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“ears of griffins
couldn’t salt my heart”… great writing here
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Powerful and amazing! A whole story in just a few perfectly chosen words
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Thanks, JYP!
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