DARK MATTER will we find the fabric of darkness buried in a mine shaft? this scrim tide that hurricanes through me might leave its finger print on pure crystal like a disrespectful thief, then in dogmatic spin hold its skirt hems tight to its centre and never be seen again.
This was written for Twiglet #296. “a dark wall” but largely inspired by a podcast I heard describing how a lab for discerning dark matter is being built a kilometre underground in a gold mine in Victoria (Australia). The idea is that the depth underground will protect the lab from the sun’s radiation. The poem is taken from how the journalist described dark matter.
What an outstanding description. I esp. love the last stanza.
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Thanks, Debi!
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Love this. I am always fascinated by physics, though I don’t a thing about the math behind it.
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Sorry Bob. I thought I had replied to this. Thank you. I don’t know anything about the maths either. I just was totally bamboozled by the description of dark matter. It seemed impossible. Magical. And bizarre to need a crystal in a mine. I”m sure there’s more to it than that but people have been laughed at for less weird things. š
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The whole process baffles me too. But I am very glad there are people clever enough to engineer how to measure such things. It’s wonderful how large and complex our universe is. I think your poem was wonderful, and certainly had me more excited about such discoveries.
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Like Bob there, I don’t know much about the maths! But I do love the words and these words are fantastic!
“this scrim tide that hurricanes through me might leave its finger print” šššššš
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Thanks Ken!!!!
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What an extraordinary idea – searching for dark matter in an old gold mine. There is a kind of allegorical quality to the quest. Your mysterious poem highlights this. I am in awe of your poetry.
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Thank you Suzanne. You’re very kind. ā¤
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I agree with Debi; that last stanza just blew me away. I love reading your poetry.
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Thanks Misky. That means a lot to me.
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Sheer mastery of poetic imagery! Such lush and vivid descriptions. Wonderful writing, as always. š
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Thank you, Mike! š
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