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a week of rain and then we load the line with washing~ the chooks wend between, so much flap and cackle and the lined wicker basket sits trimmed with socks on the marble-topped table later the ruffian west with its bruises and tuffets cools the air to yellow my arms prickle as I bring it all back in again folding and folding catching the day in fabric pores I sit amongst piles holding the fragrance on the bed breathing takes me to childhood again my motherβs room the future is only a catnap away heaving and drying too who knows if Iβm durable~ like denim perhaps paling knees and frayed hems and pockets that let slip the small change but holding on all the same like the Xiβan warriors their wounded clay and cardamom eyes secreting the breath of earth and sun across two and a half thousand years
Brilliant Worms! ππππππ”The Fabric of Time” or “Washing Line Adventures”
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Oh yes! I like The Fabric of time! Thank you!
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I marvel at your poetry
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Thank you!
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Fantastic!
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Thanks Bob. Nothing like washing to inspire a poet!
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It’s just amazing how you manage to make poetry of everyday life, fantastic.
May I suggest the title ‘amongst piles’
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Oooh. Thanks Ulle. I like that title!
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Excellent.
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Thanks!
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I love the title and the poem. I have a clear picture of those socks trimmed on your washing basket. π
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:-). Thanks Tracy!
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This is so gorgeous. I love the reflection in this particular image:
“I bring it all back in again
folding and folding
catching the day in fabric pores”
and this:
“who knows if Iβm durable~
like denim perhaps”
and the whole of that last stanza is so exciting and unexpected. I want to know more. Your reflection just goes deeper still and where it goes is wonderful. I would submit this somewhere, for sure. Also, I really like Ken’s title The Fabric of Time too! π
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Thanks so much. I like the last stanza too. So much, I began to wonder if the rest was necessary. :-). So I’m glad you liked other bits as well!
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I wouldn’t change a thing. You’re welcome.
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Fantastic imagery throughout, but especially love that last stanza
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