
This month, visualverse.org ran an autumn competition using the above image. We were away and (due to socialising) I didn’t finish my poem in time to submit it but I thought I would post it here having worked on it a little further.
What are we selling?
we walk from beach to dune past hue and half and so the lap of overlapping leaves; past totem trees, slender and spotted full and fine of vertical grace; past tepid stillness of a creek where drips and ticks might topple like these glass eyes (the blue inquiry: buy me? buy me?); and reflections hang, insipid perfection striving for the bottom of the surface and all the while movie machines and movie merch make advertising of our mouths. we're programming our children like LEGO men (and ourselves) to mewl and weep, to catch the bounty, the phantasmagoric flood of consumer counters and collection pits empty plastic heads and empty beating hearts striving for the bottom of the surface
Fabulous!
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Did you enter?
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No. Not this month.
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Excellent!
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thank you!
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