(A story from the Yolngu people of Arnhem Land)
There’s a bird that nests in the big pine near our back door and it sings at night. It’s singing now “what ‘cha doin’?” like I’m crazy to be sitting here thinking about the moon. I’ve got one of those deck chairs that has a floppy seat until you fill it, the sort with stripey fabric and folding pine legs, and I’ve got my beer and the old table Gramps left us with curly whirly iron for the base From here, the sky is a pond and he’s a silver-bellied fish, that moon, and I’m watching as he skinny dips - see! See the rainbows shimmying off his scales and down the faces of those white-horse clouds. He’s starkers and cavorting and then the bird asks again “What ‘cha doing?” so I point upwards and say “Your tree is a highway, bird. A highway to the biggest lake of all. Where flying and swimming are the same thing. See that?” There’s a silence then simple and enormous, filling space all the way to the distant stars. The bird and I have eyes only for the sky. But soon my beer is finished so I fold up my chair and head inside just as the bird says quietly “What ‘cha doin’?” like I'm crazy to leave.
This poem was written for Sarah’s Mooning Around prompt on dVerse. I looked at all the different indigenous North American peoples Sarah had found who referenced the moon in particular ways and I thought I should look into moon references in Australian Indigenous peoples. My poem is based on a story from Arnhem Land. You can read it here.
This is fascinating!! The breadth of research coupled with beautiful poetry ~~ a beautiful write ~ loved it!
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Thank you so much, Helen! What a lovely comment!
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I just read yours (but can’t seem to comment). It’s lovely! I especially love the last 3 lines!
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This was well written, and the closing stanza made me smile — thank you for that. 🙂✌🏼
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Thanks, Rob!
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Unlike the bird, I KNOW what you’re doin’. You’re writing some damned fine poetry. Salute!
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Thanks Ron! 😊 I need to figure out what kind of bird it is.
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What perfectly innocent bait, the bird is not afraid to speak his mind, as your poetry always does. 😁
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😊
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Fantastic poem – the tone, the repetition of the bird call, and how its meaning changes, the detail – fabulous.
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Many thanks, Sarah. And thank you so much for the prompt. A lovely way to approach the moon.
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What an absolute delight to read! I love your fish moon tale in a poem! I love the singing bird, the concrete description of the deck chair that reminds me of the one my grandmother had, the pond sky with the moon as a ‘silver-bellied fish’! I have a huge smile on my face and your poem has set me up for the day.
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Thank you, Kim! That’s such a lovely comment! I’m so so glad you liked it.
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You’re more than welcome.
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Fabulous.
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Thank you!
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Absolutely fabulous poetry… love that stanza with the skinny dipping moon, and I think the bird knows…
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😁 almost certainly
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“From here, the sky is a pond
and he’s a silver-bellied fish,
that moon, and I’m watching
as he skinny dips –
see! See the rainbows shimmying
off his scales and down the faces
of those white-horse clouds.
He’s starkers and cavorting”
Love the imagery in this!
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Thank you!
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I enjoyed that story under your link, too.
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Thanks!
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