NovPAD Day 11 (scary poem)
waist high grass & wind’s whimmer she lies in it invisible as a body in a river as a woman going grey gives herself up to growth’s tide & grass’ run bowed over by a thousand blind heads slashed by shadows’ whips she’s drowning in summer, knows the choke of swallowed flies & fallen sky mouth oh dark oh this sea of motion gamut of whispering this is fear entry’s concentric rings press in & in no breath no up just heat just waiting & comfortless blue
Beautiful. I could feel it, see it. I lived it.
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thank you so much 💕
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What a nifty device this is:
mouth oh
dark oh
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Thanks. This is the first poem I’ve written in years that I felt had performance qualities. I want to try more of that sort.
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Wonderful. Really enjoyed the audio.
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Thanks so much, Bob. Thanks for listening!
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Beautiful. And I enjoyed your reading of it too.
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Thank you!
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