NovPAD Day 22 (Love Poem)
like a poem she has set herself free to be understood or not it is wild a kind of ownership & blind the way blindness sees through the dark it is beauty without eyelashes cloud ribbons in a mango sky it is the scarlet bird rising from the cactus
love the tone of this, the ripe, rich imagery and that gorgeous trio of lines: ‘it is beauty/ without eyelashes/ cloud ribbons in a mango sky’
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Thanks, John. Your comment is much appreciated!
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Love this, especially the first and third stanzas. Fantastic!
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Thanks, Bob!
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Very sensual.
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Beautiful! Love that third stanza especially.
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