blackberry night I cup the breeze to my bellybutton fingertip cool curtains whisper thought patterns unplucked two stars like boat hooks hold all my fuzzy dreams I watch and I sink the rock of breath legs like ropes I am plait I am fray
written for Whimsy Gizmo’s dVerse quadrille – a 44 word poem including the word “star”
I’d probably add that you’re a poet. xx
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❤️
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Simultaneous plait & fray. Ain’t THAT the truth!
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:-). So true.
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Fantastic.
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thanks Bob
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a beautiful opening: esp love the lines : ‘two stars like boat hooks/ hold all my fuzzy dreams’ —
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thanks, John
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I love this entire thing. It has your signature style.
–Shay
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thanks, Shay!
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There were more than a few divine words I with I thought of using! Delightful!
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thank you!
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I meant “wish”; I don’t have a lisp … honest! 🤣
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:-). I was a little confused by the sentence. 🙂
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I guess when in doubt just say “thank you!” 😂 😂
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Well you said “Delightful” which seemed good to me. 😂
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