written for Shay’s word garden – Arthur Rimbaud
At three a.m. she’s not asleep wide-eyed with saluting plovers watching the sky strut by. Everyone knows night hides its face in time lapse imagery, its galaxies all a whirl, and she, stranded in puckered cotton and vagabond stars - observes heavenly washerwomen, exfoliate light - making space turn grey. And still the plovers drive the dark on and on. Each know themselves to be playthings of the Milky Way, bird and human together captured in its erotic silver-wolf skin, its astral follies, and wild, circling solace.
Plovers are crazy 😂
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plovers are a plenty at Aldinga Beach where they have a protected zone during the breeding season; love the refreshingly startling imagery; nothing pedestrian about your verse, Worms 🙂
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Thanks, John! Fancy plovers having a protected zone. :-). I feel like I need the protection! 😉
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hahha; good one, Worms 🙂
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I particularly like the imagery in your last verse. Lovely.
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Thanks so much, Margaret!
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Playthings of the Milky Way. I so enjoyed that notion, Jo.
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Thank you, Tracy!
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That first stanza is wonderful.
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Vagabond stars. Really? Damn! 🌟
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🙂
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Fantastic! love the imagery.
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Thank you so much, Bob!
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Why am I not surprised to find plovers and insomniacs at the very center of the revolving star-wheel of the cosmos? It had to be. You have such a knack, Jo, for finding the perfect unexpected ingredient in all of your poems. Plovers! They must be chuffed to get this star turn, so to speak. 😉
The washerwomen, the plovers driving the dark, themselves playthings… I can’t tell you what a treat it is to read what you create.
–Shay
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You are so kind, Shay. ❤
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This poem is really wonderful. I especially love how it rises towards the closing fabulous stanza.
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Many thanks, Sherry!
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Never underestimate the plovers! They are such tiny but brave birds. I can see them running to the tide line of the galaxy whorls in your poem. “stranded in puckered cotton and vagabond stars ” is a wonderful line.
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Thanks qbit! I love your comment! “the tide line of the galaxy whorls”. Wish that was in my poem! 🙂
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It was!
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😂
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