( a bit of nonsense)
the crux of it is this: I heard nevers in my ears rumbling blood motes like sea churn, piles and piles nevers at my fingertips dull, distant, flunky you can’t imagine them so skerrickcist, so dumpling and more nevers all down my spine like nuts clunking: shiftily, gribbily the roll and tumble, keeping moon-shape my body’s whip of neverish tides this is cracking, i say nevers are trumpets. nevers are darkshine nevers are how we find ourselves in the taran taraaa of forever
This poem came about because I tried to type “nerves” and I typed “nevers”
It is written for Twiglet #312. “cracking walnuts”
This is great, Jo – very clever and fun 🙂
❤
David
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Thanks David. 🙂
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The switch from nerves to nevers really works!
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Yes it really does! 👍💯😁
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Thanks, JYP!
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“nevers are how we find ourselves…” is a brilliant line Jo! 👏👏👌👌 And makes a lot of sense, when more so than if you’d typed “nerves.”
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Thanks so much, Ken! I so appreciate you reading my poem and your lovely words!
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My pleasure Jo, always enjoy reading your work. You’ve a wonderful way with words. And not afraid to write something different or offbeat. 👏👏👌👌❤️❤️
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❤
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I think I’m going to find a poem with repetitive lines or words, and substitute a new word in its place. By the way, what’s skerrickcist? Google knows not.
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It’s a made up word. I feel like it might be a person who like things in small doses.
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Love it. 🥰
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This remind me of “Late last night and the night before, Tommyknockers, Tommyknockers knocking at the door” which was the opening to Stephen King’s novel The Tommyknockers. I’d never heard it that way; I had it with “little robbers” instead of Tommyknockers. Anyway, what do nevers eat and are there many of them? 🙂
–Shay
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Nevers instead of nerves. A happy accident that turned out wonderful.
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Thanks Bob!
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Thank you Bob!
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love the unfettered fun of this; the wild whimsy; and that word ‘gribbily’; good to see you are letting your silly in 🙂
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Thanks John.
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Really enjoy the sonic nature and shifting movement in this poem.
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Thanks, Sunra!
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Serendipitous fun
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Thanks, Debi
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