Can a found poem be found visually?
She is taller than her mother in big doc boots trimmed in yellow with black stitching but she holds her mother’s hand and balances on the bright orange letters that read “Trenerry” her black skirt flapping and cars passing and the man with head phones and correction red hair and calves like footballs nods to them serious as a game then she jumps to the pavement while the row of pigeons watches from the shopping centre roof the pink in their feathers is luminescent in the afternoon sun
this works for me, Worms: a vivid vignette — and I learnt what correction red hair was; you certainly were paying attention —
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eh? what is correction red hair? I just meant the colour of a red pen. :-). What did you learn?
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by putting a toner with the opposite colour [green], you can neutralize the brassiness of the red colour
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Yes, absolutely it works.
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Thank you!
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Love this, Worms!
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Thanks!
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Fantastic!
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Thank you, Bob!!
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Yes. Your eye for detail is a joy to read.
–Shay
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