from the ford
we saw a slim woman
dark hair and a blue silk scarf
and a little boy with yellow shorts
his stick poking tuffets
the creek
made exuberant noise
and little white
whirlpools
and the wind
strung laughter
from her face
I remembered
she was a young German woman
who married a farmer
and makes fine rooster soup
we waved
but didn’t stop
to change the scene
we drove into a heron-love sky
elegance circling
three dead trees
silhouettes in ribbons of sundown
later
as we wound up the mountain
I regretted not stopping
lovely images; I was struck by the line: ‘fine rooster soup’ ; a delicacy perhaps? I like the way you wove these images around a narrative —
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Thanks so much John. I so appreciate you taking the time to comment. 😊
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I like your work, Worms; I look forward to posts from you; they are never tepid —
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What John said, Worms!
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Thank you so much!
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