I remember the mist
easing into the river valley
one damp length of
sock loosely draping
over a sentience of green
like the ground
how it cradles each foot
when I walk
nose out front
I am clamped
inside thought battles
wet-toed and fuzzy headed
in a morning only half un-sunk
the whip bird cracks
urging on the rising sun
and grey humps of kangaroos
beat down dew drops
in the grass
later
the sky’s twin
finds my eye shimmer-wise
I'm between the two of them
one smooth, the other rippled
my own thoughts
exacted in puddles of blue
Sounds like a wonderful walk. I really enjoyed the contemplative mood. And the ending, I read “the sky’s twin” and thought what is this? The last line in the stanza, I realized it was a reflection. The last stanza is perfect.
I love the grey humps of kangaroos; often see them in our walks along the banks of the Myponga reservoir ; and the whip bird cracks, like a ringmaster, urging on the rising sun —
Sounds like a wonderful walk. I really enjoyed the contemplative mood. And the ending, I read “the sky’s twin” and thought what is this? The last line in the stanza, I realized it was a reflection. The last stanza is perfect.
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I love the grey humps of kangaroos; often see them in our walks along the banks of the Myponga reservoir ; and the whip bird cracks, like a ringmaster, urging on the rising sun —
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