Your hand is just a hand
slung casually in mine
I will hold it as a shell
soft against my ear
to listen for that intimate
swoosh which animates
your skin. The word “natural”
is overused and yet
I claim it for the way
your hand just arrived
palm on candid palm
and how both hands
just curved a little - that
instinct for grip as shelter.
A shell is a home
just as your hand
is in mine. And this
autumn day, walking
by a red vine, is one
that’s worth remembering.
Absolutely beautiful, Jo. Just gorgeous in every way. 🙂
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Thank you Mike! That means a lot to me.
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I am in LOVE with this poem, Jo. IN LOVE.
Sincerely,
David
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Thanks so much Daivd. That means a lot!
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🤗
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Could I share it as REBLOG at some point?
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Sure!
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Just beautiful Jo, absolutely gorgeous! How you took the simple gesture of hand holding and crafted something so intimate and universal! 👏👏👌👌❤️❤️😁😁
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Thanks so much, Ken! ❤️
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You’re very welcome Jo! 😁🙏👍
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Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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a beautiful poem celebrating intimacy between child and parent; it brings back fond memories; a warm and lovely poem —
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Thanks, John
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Stunning, Worms! Love it!
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You are really something… wow.
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thank you!!!!!
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