written for Twiglet #322 “you wear black”
your dress is the silence like water that fills my ears you wear black long as blindness not silky with stars but matt and patched as the old man’s tweed tam-o'-shanter I stare open to nothing and you wield that great cloud the trailing skirt of the midnight sun
Beautiful images – gives a feeling of awe
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Thank you Debi!
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this is so good, Worms: short and scintillating; ‘the trailing skirt of the midnight sun’ is breathtakingly beautiful —
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Thanks, John!
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sorry about the previous post: I couldn’t get into it —
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👍
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Gorgeous.
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Thank you.
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Brill! One of my faves!
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Thanks!
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✶
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Jo, it’s a very good thing you came “Out of the Cave” and opened that big fat can of worms… Lucky for all of us who get to read this amazing work.
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Thanks heaps Chris! You’re very kind!
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Opening lines got me. Hope all is well.
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